海口澄迈属于哪个区:美国J-1签证北京一签失败,帮忙看下我错哪了?

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早上9:30的。9:00到。排了2个小时终于到我那队,面对的是终极邪神黑MM杀手……开局不利。
V是签证官,X是我。

x:good morling~
v:nice to meet you.how are you
x:fine,thanx.(随便温柔滴笑,展现我滴良好形象。)
v:what's your name?(她之后就没看过我了……)
x:xiazhini。
v:how old are you?
x:17years old.
v:why do you want to go to the USA?
x:i'm a exchange student.i want to know the lifestyle of US and study american english.later i hope to enroll at zhongshan university to study laungage,the experi!@@(经验……不记得拼……我卡住了。)will help me.(我这么年轻要求不能太高……目的不能太伟岸。)
v:zhongshan university??where is it?
x:guangzhou.
v:why do you choose zhongshan university?
X:it's famous and near hunan,i can't leave my parents too far.(对于她来说似乎不FAMOUS)
V:you are in hunan.oh...i heard that hunan foods are very hot.(然后她用中文说:很辣是吗?听来是:哼辣尸吗)
X:yes,it's ture.sichuan foods and hunan foods are hot.
v:and...what program??
x:via.ventrue international assosation.
v:can you tell sth. about it?
x:yes.it sets in okla city,okla.(这句不知道说得对不……)and it can give a chance to the students who want to study in US for one year.....
v:(打断)why do you choose via?
x:it has long history...about 10 years.and it has sent many students to Us. (是不是不该这么说……)
V:Why VIA CHOOSE YOU?
x:I take the examination called "SLEP"and got a high score.(其实我这时应该说我很优秀&递成绩证明和奖状)
v:沉默……blablabla...※%^$^#$◎%*%×(鬼晓得她说的什么)。
x:would you plese pardon?
v:blablabla....you study...blabla...
x:sorry i can't catch you clearly.
v:(脸凑过来)who fund you??????
x:ohhhhh....my parents,the have their job.....(然后我开始说我爸在司法厅当什么我妈在大学当什么收入怎样怎样。但这时候她开始调麦克风不知道她听我的没。)
x:do you want to see some files??(偶英语词汇量少……不知道怎样说财产证明……)
v:no..(那我就没想法怎么说服她什么“牢固的约束力”了)give me the inventation letter
x:(双手递入。)
v:en...what grade are you in?
x:i'm in senir 2.
v:(没搭腔,只看看看看看看我的信。)do you think i can give you the visa?
x:yes,i believe that i can persuade you by my words.
v:hahahhahahah!!!(看都没看我。嘲笑……)
x:hahahaha.....(败笔……我干嘛和她一起傻笑。)
v:@*(^E$^!(#*^)&(没听清。然后她拿着我的表走到其他窗口去了。)
X:(抖……)
V:(1分钟左右回来。开始在电脑上打字。)en...why do you choose the program?
x:(我又败了..回答得和开始差不多。略)
v:how old are you??(为什么又问?)
x:17 years old。
v:(听到回答后拿出章盖上。)sorry i can't give you visa this time.
x:please tell me why?
v:(拿白条,和签证一起递出来)you can find all the anser on this paper.see you next time.
X:thanx.....(警察大妈上来架走我……我又不杀人……

其间我确信我表现得自信且自然。其他开始VISA DOCTOR觉得不会过的在其他窗口过了,我一个人郁闷滴离开北京……8月3日再战!大家指导下我第一次哪错了……我改!下次碰到杀手也不怕!

我觉得从英语口语表达上说,你应该没什么问题,双方都能理解彼此的意思。
只是,从你和他对话的内容上看,我总觉得你是特矛盾的人,有些话说的很牵强!
比如:你一会说要去美国接受他们的教育,一会又说要进中山大学读书。
一会说不想离父母太远,一会又要美国的VISA。难道美国比广东更近吗?
还有你说了一堆你的父母的职务,在美国这种人人都要求独立和自由的社会,是不太能接受你把你父母当作你的骄傲来谈。你已满17岁即将独自去美国生活的快成年人,为什么不多说些,比如你的成绩使的你的父母为你而骄傲。你的独立,也使得你的父母对你独立去美国非常放心!
我没出过国,这是我一点建议,希望对你有帮助!

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你没错,只是你的英语水平不够
拒签一般只有两种情况,1.英语能力不足,2,经济漏洞