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Like May Day,we enjoy a seven-day holiday,too.We can travel to many places of interest.And I usually finish my homework two days before the holiday ends.So I can play on the computer.On October 6th and 7tn.In the morning of October 1st,I always think of the long story of our motherland when I see our national flag going up on the TV.So I like National Day very much.

Like May Day,we enjoy another seven-day holiday--National Day.We can travel to many places of interest.And I usually begin to do my homework only two days before the holiday ends.So I can have some time to play on the computer On October 6th and 7th.On the morning of October 1st,I always think of the long story of our motherland when I see our national flag going up on TV.So I like National Day very much.

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