唐河书记李德成简历:请问这一句2:

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The students of our province who had passed the prelim of the university (or college) entrance examination amounted to 500,000 and i am one of them.
这句话正确吗?如果有错误,应该怎样改正呢?

挺好~~~~~`
或者可以说
the students in my province who have passed

entrance examination 可以不要