《灾难大电影》百度云:请大家帮我修改一篇英语日记
Later,my mother got home,I read a book:<The World Of Unsolved Secrets>it made me feel amazing!
I think:books are good teacher,they teach me a lot of knowledge!
relaxing - relaxed
played computer - played with computer/played computer games
waited - waited for
teacher-teachers
they teach me a lot of knowledge - they teach me a lot
Later,my mother got home,I read a book两句之间没什么联系,可以用Later,my mother got home,and I also read a book
Today the weather was windy and cool.I think it made me feel really happy and relaxed.I stayed at home I played my computer and waited for my mother.
Later my mother got home. I read a book:"The World Of Unsolved Secrets".It is an amazing book!
I think books are good teachers. They teach me a lot of knowledge!
写得不错.句子通顺.但要注意标点符号.我改了一些小地方,你对照一下.Keep up the good job!
relaxing-relaxed,
waited-waited for
teacher-teachers
注意标点, think:(:)去掉
把the weather was windy and cool改成it was windy and cool(习惯说法)
把relaxing改成relaxed
played computer改成used computer或played computer games
tercher加s